Night Mistress

Lucy is again a brat for thinking she is better than Sophia. At least Sophia has some manners. I feel sorry for Helena for Lucy being her sister-in-law. and James ...

umm..... interesting. i was pulling for james and is still pulling for james. Richad maybe be handsom and a gentleman, but what about his private life? Have james ask sophia ...

Hey tusker, If you want someone to crit your work, look for the mods. they are the greenies and dark greenies in the site. i am sure they would be ...

Hey Sara, Welcome to YWS. Please make note of the Rule and Guides under the Help and Support Wiki. I look forward to seeing your work around.

Merry, why didn't you tell me you posted another chapter? have you forgotten about me? :sniffles: anyways, James is being wierd in this chapter. i am surprise he kiss her. ...

oh, this is getting intereesting. but there is one thing that bugs me. If Nora and Carmen are sohpia's friends, why aren't they hang around her? i hope carmen doesn't ...

Geez. just make the girl go out with Charlie. she is pratically obesses with the guy. this story is getting addictive, so write the five part fast. i'm off to ...

Hey, Ryan! Welcoem to YWS. So, you write thrillers? Neat, I write romance fiction. Well, please make note of the rules and guides under the help and support Wiki. I ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. Please make note of the Rules and Guides under the Help and Support Wiki at the very top of the page. I look forward to seeing ...

ohhh.... so it sounds like carmen and Sophia's friendship is end because of Nora. but isn't Sophia their uniter or something like that? so won't carmen always have a strong ...

ohhh... so that richard guy was one of her suitors. and what's with helena? at the beginning at the story, she seems to be falling in love with james, but ...

uh no.... i have a feeling that this is going to get all tangle up with Lucy falling for Issac and Helena falling for Simon. and what was James going ...

you need to slowly down the dancing. it was too quickly for my taste, unless it was an upbeat dance. I also have the feeling that James is a suitor. ...

Is this handsome lord one of her suitors? ! guess I will have to read the whole story to found out, won't I? I am really liking your story. I ...

i wonder why James was so rude to Sophia. and oh, i hope Helena isn't in love with James if he's one of the suitor for Sophia. i don't want ...